2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 4 Sharing 5 Section Ⅴ Writing

SectionⅤWritingUnit4Sharing关于志愿活动或有关分享的记叙文文体感知关于志愿活动或有关分享的文章是记述活动的目的、过程以及结果(或影响)的记叙文。注意事项：①理清与活动相关的时间、地点、人物、活动的过程以及影响等。②明确文章结构：开头部分介绍人物、活动的目的或原因；第二部分介绍活动的过程或者主人公做了什么；最后记述活动对他人、自己或社会的影响。③找准时态与人称，理清写作顺序，将文章的要素合理结合，使其完整。增分佳句1．Havinghadaheateddiscussion,wedecidedtodosomething.热烈讨论后，我们决定做一些事情。2．Wealsorealizethatwecandosomethingtothosewhoareinneed.我们也意识到我们能对那些需要的人做一些事。3．Thestorymaybeunbelievable,butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.这个故事可能不可信，但是它现在仍然具有一个现实意义。写作模板Lastweek____________inourclassvolunteeredtheirtimetohelpotherpeople.Havinghadaheateddiscussion,wedecidedtodo____________．(总体介绍活动的目的和背景)On____________day,wesetoutearlyinthemorning.Onone’sarrival/arriving,wedid____________first.Then,wedid____________anddid____________.Inaddition,notonlydidwedo____________butalsowedid__________.Lastbutnotleast,wedid____________．(叙述活动的过程)Wehavelearnedthat____________.Wealsorealizethatwecando____________tothosewhoareinneed.(表达对活动的感受和活动的影响)写作要求你校英文杂志社正在举办有关志愿者活动的征文大赛。请你根据自己的志愿者经历写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1．表达对志愿者活动的热爱；2．讲述做志愿者的经历；3．呼吁更多人参与志愿者活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇词汇推敲1．对某事充满热情______________________________2．对某人有益________________________3．对某人有意义________________________4．自愿做某事________________________5．全身心投入到某事______________________________6．号召某人做某事________________________beenthusiasticaboutsth.bebeneficialtosb.bemeaningfultosb.volunteertodosth.devoteone’seffortstosth.callonsb.todosth.遣词造句1.完成句子①我热衷于志愿者活动，它不仅对他人有益而且对我而言很有意义。I________________________________________.Theyarenotonly________________________________________________．②自从进入高中以来，我有多次志愿者活动的经历。________________________________,I’vehadseveralexperiencesofbeingavolunteer.amenthusiasticaboutvolunteeractivitiesbeneficialtoothersbutalsomeaningfultomeSinceIattendedhighschool③我印象最深的是帮助地震受灾区的受害者。And________________________whenIvolunteeredtoassistthevictimsinanearthquake.④我一到达受灾地区，就帮忙为灾民发放慰问品。Iarrivedatthedisaster­hitarea.I________________________reliefmaterials________________．⑤我努力帮助医护人员进行救援工作。I________________________________therescueworkwiththemedicalstaff.themostimpressiveoneishelpedtodistributetothevictimsdevotedallmyeffortsto⑥为了安慰那些失去家园的人，我与他们谈话，鼓励他们。_________________________________,Italkedwiththemandinspiredthem.⑦当一名志愿者使我感到高兴与自豪。________________makesmedelightedandproud.⑧我想号召人人参加志愿者活动。Iwantto_____________________________________________．TocomfortthosewholosttheirfamilyBeingavolunteercalloneveryonetotakepartinvolunteeractivities2．句式升级⑨把①中的两个句子合并并升级为定语从句。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑩把④中的两个句子合并并升级为时间状语从句。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamenthusiasticaboutvolunteeractivities,whicharenotonlybeneficialtoothersbutalsomeaningfultome.AssoonasIarrivedatthedisaster­hitarea,Ihelpedtodistributereliefmaterialstothevictims.妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Iamenthusiasticaboutvolunteeractivities,whicharenotonlybeneficialtoothersbutalsomeaningfultome.SinceIattendedhighschool,I’vehadseveralexperiencesofbeingavolunteer.AndthemostimpressiveoneiswhenIvolunteeredtoassistthevictimsinanearthquake.AssoonasIarrivedatthedisaster­hitarea,Ihelpedtodistributereliefmaterialstothevictims.Inaddition,Idevotedallmyeffortstotherescueworkwiththemedicalstaff.Besides,tocomfortthosewholosttheirfamily,Italkedwiththemandinspiredthem.Beingavolunteermakesmedelightedandproud.HereIwanttocalloneveryonetotakepartinvolunteeractivities.假定你叫李华，上周末你和几位同学在学校附近的孤儿院做志愿者，请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1．时间和地点；2．活动的主要内容：分发礼物；教他们阅读和写作；打扫卫生和洗衣服；3．你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孤儿院orphanage________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Lastweekend,someofmyclassmatesandIwenttoworkasvolunteersinanorphanagenearourschool.Whenwegotthere,allthechildrenwelcomedushappily.Weweretoucheddeeplyandgavethembighugs.Afterthat,wegaveawaypresentstothem,andtaughtthemreadingandwriting.Besides,wehelpedtocleantheirroomsandwashtheirclothes.Seeingthesweetsmilesontheirfaces,wefeltverypleased.Thisvaluableexperienceimpressedmedeeplyandinspiredmetokeeponhelpingthoseinneed.本部分内容讲解结束按ESC键退出全屏播放