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知识目标：Tohelpstudentscatchthemainideaofthepassageandeachparagraph能力目标：Tohelpstudentsconcludethepassageintheirownlanguage情感态度与价值观：Guidestudentstocommentsb/sthobjectively教学重点：Tohelpthestudentsfindoutthetopicsentencesquicklyandcorrectly教学难点：Tohelpthestudentsreplacethemwithpropervocabulariesandsentencestructures教学方法：Analyzing,comparing,conclusion教学工具：Multimediafacilities,blackboardQ1:Whoarethey?Q2:Whatarethey?Q3:Whosecontributionstosocietyareless?Q4:Whoseincomearehigher?Q5:Doeshedeservethehighpay?StepOne--Warmingup&Leadingin阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要（上）。Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousAmericanbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollarsayear.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,professors,etc.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Whilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要(下）。What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDaVinci’spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportsequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknownintheworld,theyattractmanypeople’sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesoftheproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.StepTwo--PresentationSkillOne---Judgethetypesofthepassage√narrationexpositionargumentationSkillTwo-WhichistheRIGHTstructureofthetext?A.↗②↘B.↗②↘④①→③⑤①↘④↗↘③↗⑤C.↗①↘④D.↗①↘→②→②→↘③↗⑤→③→⑤↘④↗Skill3-KnowthemainideafromPara1Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousAmericanbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollarsayear.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,professors,etc.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.1.Whatdoestheunderlineword“that”referto?Tips-UsethethirdpersontowriteSkill4-SkimforSupportingpointsinfollowingparasWhilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.Tip2-Keywordsforeachsentences2.Whydopeopleenjoywatchingtheirperformances?Skill4-SkimforkeypointsineachparaWhat’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDaVinci’spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.Tip3-Leaveoutunnecessaryexamplesor\details3.Whatcontributestotheirgoodincome?Skill4-SkimforkeypointsineachparaTheirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportsequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknownintheworld,theyattractmanypeople’sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesoftheproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.Tip4-Takenoticeoftheinformativewords4.Howdoestheauthorexplaintheinfluence?Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.(Para.1)Differentfromsomepeople’sviews,thewriterbelievessportsstars’payisnottoohighbutreasonable.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.(Para.2)sportsstars’performancebringpeopleexcitementandspiritualwell-being.Skill5-Transformingthepoints(介词短语，同义词）Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtrain