全国高考英语应用文写作

全国高考英语应用文写作recallthosebeautifuldays回忆那些美好的日子haveaninjection打针helpmewithmylessons帮助我的功课failintheexamination考试不合格blessings祝福expressone’ssinceregratitude表达真诚的谢意afeelingofanxiety焦虑感takeadeepbreath深深呼一口气calmdown冷静下来applause掌声remindsb.of...使某人想起expressone’sthanksfor表达某人的感谢hospitality好客strictdiscipline严格的纪律treatsb.款待某人motherlycare母亲般的关怀returnone’skindness回报某人的善意1.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.先谢谢您！2.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!祝您梦想成真！3.Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!祝我们的友谊天长地久！4.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong.我写信来表达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢！5.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldn’thavebeenthatsuccessful.没有您的帮助，表演不会有那么成功。6.Weallmissyouandareverygratefulforwhatyoudidforus.我们都很想念您，也很感激您为我们做的一切。7.Howiseverythingwithyoulately?您最近如何？8.I’dliketoexpressmythanksforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhenIwasinAmerica.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。9.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.给您和家人致以良好的祝福！10.Inaddition,whathasimpressedmemostis...而且，最让我感动的是……11.IhopesomedayyouwillcometovisitChinaandIcanreturnyourkindness.我希望有一天你能够来中国，我可以回报你的友好。1.Iamwritingtoexpressmythankforyouradvice.1.thank改为thanks2.Thankyoufordoingsomuchtomakemytripinterested.2.interested改为interesting3.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldn’tpassadrivingtest.3.a改为the4.IwouldlikeyoutoknowhowgratefulIamtoyouforyourkindnessandgenerous.4.generous改为generosity5.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksforyoukindletterofsympathy.5.you改为your6.Nothinghasgivenmemorepleasantthantheletteryousentmeontheoccasionofmyillness.6.pleasant改为pleasure7.Ithankyoubythedeepconcernyouhaveshownaboutmyhealth.7.by改为for8.Yourfriendshiplikeawarmfireintheicywinter,whichwillremainacomfortandgivemestrength.8.like前面加上is9.WithyourhelpwewereabletovisittheNationalParkandseveralotherplacesofinteresting.9.interesting改为interest10.Yourkindnessandhospitalitywillforeverbecherishedinourmemorize.10.memorize改为memory【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1.自我介绍；2.祝贺苏琳生日；3.感谢工作人员；4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。满分佳作（一）DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.①AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethree.②I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?③Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分赏析①用到Iwasdelightedtolearnthat…这个宾语从句句型；givebirthto(产子)使用得当，像这种短语如果用错，会给老师留下不好的印象，可能使作文降低一个档次。②用到表示感谢的句型toexpressmythankstosb.；后面becauseofwhich介词加which的定语从句使句子显得更加高级。③Thankyouverymuchinadvance是表示感谢的套语，inadvance(提前)显得语气真切。满分佳作（二）DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!ThisisLiHua,astudentinChina.①I’vebeenfondofpandassincemychildhood.②Sincethreeyearsago,whenthepandaBaiyungavebirthtoababypandaSulin,Ihavebeenvisitingyourwebsitetokeepmyselfinformedabouthowthingsaregoingforthem.IfIrememberclearly,shewillturnthreesoon.③Iwanttosayhappybirthdaytoherandexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,withwhichshehasbeenbroughtupandhasbeenlivinghappilywithherparentsintheUS.④Bytheway,IwonderifIcouldhaveaphototakenofSulinonherthirdbirthday.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分赏析①短语befondof，表示“喜欢”，比简单的like显得更好，符合“短语优先”的原则。②tokeepmyselfinformedaboutsth.(让我对……情况有及时的了解)，用得非常地道。③expressmythankstosb.forsth.作为表示感谢的句型，运用准确；withwhich的定语从句更显语法功力。④IwonderifIcould…这样的句型表示请求，更显语气委婉礼貌。【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】作文原题假设你叫李华，王平是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给王平写一篇毕业留言。要点：1.简要表述王平在你心目中的印象；2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；3.对王平表示美好的祝愿。作文翻译亲爱的王平，是时候说再见了。是时候回忆我们一起度过的美好时光了。你正是在我需要的时候给我帮助的那个人。还记得两年前的那个晚上吗？我突然生病时，是你背着我到附近的医院。我打针时，你把我照顾很好。后来，你设法帮助我学习。没有你的帮助，我考试不会通过了。我依然有数百个故事和你分享。我依然有数千个祝福给你。愿你所有梦想成真！愿我们的友谊直到永远！你的，李华DearWangPing,It’stimetosaygoodbye.It’stimetorecallthosebeautifuldayswespendtogether.Youaretheverypersonwhogivesmeahandwhennecessary.Stillrememberthatnighttwoyearsago?WhenIsuddenlyfellill,itwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital.YoutookgoodcareofmewhileIwashavinganinjection.Later,youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons.Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldhavefailedintheexamination.Istillhavehundredsofstoriestosharewithyou.Istillhavethousandsofblessingsforyou.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!Yours,LiHua【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】作文原题假如你是李华，你的外教Bill帮你排练了一首英文歌曲，在学校的圣诞派对上你的表演取得了成功，请你写一封电子邮件，向他描述一下晚会及你的情况，并向他表示感谢。作文翻译亲爱的Bill，我写这封信来表达我对您教我英文歌的衷心感谢，也与你分享我的经历。因为今天是圣诞节，我们学校早上举办了一个圣诞派对，在派对上老师和学生表演了很多精彩的节目。我唱了您教我的那首英文歌。我走上舞台的那一刻，一种紧张感袭来。然而，深呼吸之后，我冷静了下来。我的歌刚唱完，掌声如雷。我的表演棒极了。这是我第一次在公众场合进行这样好的表演。没有您的帮助，这次表演不可能这么成功。再次感谢，圣诞快乐！您真挚的，李华DearBill,I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong,andtosharemyexperiencewithyou.SinceitisChristmastoday,ourschoolheldaChristmaspartyinthemorning,wherethereweresomanyamazingperformancesbystudentsandteachers.Isangthesongyoutaughtme.ThemomentIgotonthestage,afeelingofanxietycameovertome.However,takingadeepbreath,Icalmeddown.Rightaftermysong,applauseoverwhelmedme!Myperformancewasabsolutelyfantastic.Itisthef