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范文讲评:旅游事业「要求」要求:旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以WaystoImproveChina’sTourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。(提示:扩大宣传,改善旅游设施,提高服务质量……)「范文」WaystoImprovechina’stourismTourismisnowbecomingamajorindustrythroughouttheworld.However,tourisminChinaisnotasdevelopedasitshouldbe.Ifthefollowingisdone,China’stourismwilldefinitelybeimproved.First,ourplacesofinterestshouldbebetteradvertisedthroughouttheworldtoattractmoretourists.Second,facilitiesshouldbeprovidedtoensurethattouristsenjoytheirtrip.Finally,thequalityofserviceshouldbeimproved.Don’ttellpeopletheirideasarebadunlessyou’vegotagoodone.「评语」本文第一段提出问题,第二段解决问题,“first”,“second”,“finally”等词的使用,使整篇文章条理格外清晰。范文讲评:如何利用空余时间「要求」题目:你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿,底稿应包含以下基本要点。随着工作时间的缩短,空余时间越来越多了。如何利用空余时间。利用空余时间的益处。题目自拟。「范文」UseofFreeTimeSomepeoplemaybesobusythattheyneverhaveasparemoment,butitwouldbehardtofindsuchpeopleincontemporarytimes.Workinghoursareshorterandvacationslonger,andtherearemoreandmorewaystospendtheweekends.Asidefromeatingandsleeping,whatdopeopledoduringthemanyhourswhentheyarenotatworkoratschool?Useoffreetimeoftendisclosesmuchaboutone’stastes,values,interestsandpersonality.Whatmaybeoneman’sleisure,however,mightbeanotherman’swork.Inleisurehours,somemayturntothehumanities:literature,magic,artandherewemightalsomentionmoviesandtelevision.Othersparticipateinsports,politics,voluntaryworkorhobbiesathome.Stillotherslikeparties,travelling,orjustloafing.Obviously,theuseoffreetimeisagoodmeansofrelaxation,butitsbenefitsgobeyondthis.Allthingspeopledoinleisurehoursenablethemtogratifytheirwishes.Thiscancontributetointellectualgrowthandpromotesocialactivitiesaswell.Sothegooduseoffreetimewillmakeliferich,colorfulandrewarding.「评语」这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出,语言丰富晓畅,例证详实,句式灵活多变,使得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句,引出下文;结尾点题,总结全文。并且很有文学性。范文讲评:旅行「要求」暑假就要到了,许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确,旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇旅游的文章。Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.Travelmayrelieveapersonofboredomandgloom.Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.「范文」TravelTravelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.Itmakesyoucomeintocontactwithdifferentcultures,meetpeopleofdifferentcolorsandgothroughpeculiarritesandceremonies.Travellingmuch,youwillnotonlyenrichyourknowledgeandexperiences,butalsobeawareofthevastnessofnature.Travelmayalsorelievepersonofboredomandgloom.Travelbringsyouenjoymentandattraction.Itgivesyouapleasantexperience,whichwilldisperseyourboredomandmakeyouforgetwhateverannoysyou.Travelbroadensyourmindandleavesyougoodmemories.Later,youmaygooverthesememoriesandenjoyyourpastexperiences,thuskeepingafreshandsunnymind.Thefield’shisstudy,naturewashisbook.Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Airplanesarethefastestbutalsothemostexpensive.Busesandtrainsarelessexpensive,buttheysoonmakeyoufeelcrampedanduncomfortable.Shipsprovideyouwithcomfortunlessyougetseasick.Mostpeoplecanaffordtravelingbybicycle,which,althoughslow,canlimberupyourmusclesandgetyouclosertonature.「评语」本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因,接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情,最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明,主题突出。“comeintocontactwith…”,“enrichyouknowledgeandexperiences”,“beawareofthevastnessofnature”,“disperseyourboredom”,“broadenyourmind”等词语的恰当搭配,生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。范文:大型企业和小型企业LargeCompaniesandSmallCompaniesDirections:WriteacompositiononthetopicLargeCompaniesandSmallCompaniesinthirtyminutes.Youshouldwritenolessthan120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。2.有的人则认为在小公司工作更能锻炼人。3.我的看法。参考范文:LargeCompaniesandSmallCompaniesUpongraduationfromcollege,youngmenandwomenfacethefirstchoiceintheircareerlife:togotoalargecompanyorasmallone?Althoughmanygraduatesareattractedbytheprestigeoflargecompanies,Ibelievethesmallonewillaffordmorechancesofsuccessandmoreopportunitiestodevelopyourability.Therearetwobasicdifferencesbetweenthelargeandsmallenterprises.First,workinginthesmallcompanyyouoperateprimarilythroughpersonalcontacts;youhavemorechancetodevelopyourcommunicationabilityandtheabilitytohandlevariouskindsofpersonalities.Incontrast,inthelargecompanythereareestablishedpoliciesandfairlyrigidprocedures.Eventhemanatthetopisonlyacoginabigmachine:youneedn’tmakeanydecisionandcan’tseetheeffectofyourwork……Second,inasmallbusinessyouarenormallyexposedtoallkindsofexperiencesandexpectedtodoagreatmanythingswithouttoomuchhelporguidance.Thus,youmayacquiremuchmoreskillsandexperience,anddeveloptheabilitytohandledifferent,complicatedthings.Butinthelargecorporation,sinceyouarenormallytaughtonethingandlimitedtooneprocedure,youmaybecomethemanwhoknowsmoreandmoreaboutlessandless.Obviouslyifyouwanttogainmoreexperienceandabilityneededinbusinessorganizationsandtobecomeanexcellentmanagerorexecutiveinyourfuturecareer,workinginasmallcompanyisyourbestchoice.范文:名人隐私PrivacyofFamousPeopleDirections:youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaynolessthan120wordsonthefollowingtopic.Newspapersandmagazineshavespecialinterestintheprivatelivesoffamouspeople.Whatcanyouexplainit?Whateffectitwillhaveonthepeoplebeingexposed?Andwhatisyouropiniono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