2011年12月英语六级答案解析

1/132011年12月大学英语六级考试答案解析PartIWriting【标准版】TheWaytoSuccessSuccessissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor.Buthaveyoueverconsideredwhatsuccessis?Somemayholdthatsuccessmeansonehasbeautifullife,likeprettyhouse,coolcarsandgreatpower.It’sindeedonewaytodefinesuccess.Buttome,successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing.Toachievethiskindofsuccess,onehastobearinmindthreeessentialprerequisites,namelyknowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesin,possessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinterestandhavingthediligencetorealizeyourdream.Inotherwords,theyare“what”“why”and“how”ofsuccess.It’sreallyluckilygoodforone,especiallyfortheyoungergenerationoftodaytofindtheirdreams,followthemandintheend,makethemcometrueandbecomesuccessful.Althoughit’snevereasytosucceed,progressingwiththestrongwillanddiligencetowardstherightdirection,you’llbetheone!【作文解析】这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”whatissuccess?”,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了自己的观点：successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing.算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。本篇亮点：1.排比词组或句子的运用：Successissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor.…namely,knowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesin,possessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinterestandhavingthediligencetorealizeyourdream.2.bearinmind3.liein4.strongwilltopursueyourinterest本文有待提高之处：1.文中人称有些混乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议统一。2.结构上，一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的“三段式”，即，提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者基本上遵循了这个原则，但第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。如果第三段，作者可以与第一段的“成功定义”相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中成功的本质。整体看，文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散，有待提高。【高分版】TheWaytoSuccessFirstessay—streamofthoughttypeTheWaytoSuccessGeniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration.Andherecomesourquestion,whatisthewaytosuccess?Astrongwillandgreateffortsarethemostessentialtwokeystothedoorofsuccess.Whydopeoplefailtoachievetheirgoal?Thereasonisthatmostofthemgiveuphalfwayduetotheirlackofastrongwilloncetheyencounteranydifficulty.Amanofastrongwillalwaysstickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.2/13WouldThomasEdisonbesuchagreatmaninhistoryifhehaddonenothingbutpossessingastrongwill?Weareallfamiliarwithhisstorythathehadtriedonethousandkindsofmaterialsbeforehefinallymadehisgreatbulblightup.Withouthardeffort,Edisonmighthavebeenanobody.Withoutefforts,noonecansucceed.Tosumup,astrongwillandgreateffortscanhelponeopenupthewaytosuccess.Wherethereisawillwithefforts,thereisaway.【作文解析】本次六级考试作文题为Thewaytosuccess，与本次四级考试作文Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill遥相呼应，大同小异，都是在讨论成功这一话题。此次六级考试作文的话题依然是老生常谈，即通往成功的道路，相信很多考生对此并不陌生，背过范文的同学写起来肯定也是得心应手。该范文段落结构清晰，阐释说理也足以让人信服，是一篇不错的作文。开篇作者通过引用爱迪生关于天才的一句名言来引出问题，吸引读者注意，引起读者的思考。紧随其后，作者就开门见山地亮出了自己的观点：只有坚强的意志和不懈的努力才能打开成功的大门。第二段，作者同样以一个问题来引领全段，引发思考。然后通过对比不成功和最终成功的人的不同表现，来阐释坚强的意志对获得成功的重要作用。第三段，作者进一步阐释“仅有坚强的意志，没有实在的努力，也能成功吗？”同样是先发问，然后举了爱迪生的事例，来证明答案是否定的。举名人的例子，而非个人的实例来作为文章的论据才更有说服力，这也是这篇作文的高明之处。最后一段，作者先以第一句话进行了总结，然后为了加强作文结尾的力度，作者还对名言“Wherethereisawill,thereisway”进行了改编，换成了自己的观点，为我所用，这也是本篇范文的一个两点之处。注意，写作文时对名言进行恰当地改编，不仅能体现幽默创新的一面，同样也体现了作者不错的文字驾驭技巧，考官也是很欢迎这样的文章的。PartIIReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)1.Googleclaimsitsplanfortheworld’sbiggestonlinelibraryis_____A.tosaveout-of-printbooksinlibraries.B.toservetheinterestofthegeneralpublicC.toencouragereadingaroundtheworldD.topromoteitscorebusinessofsearching【答案】B.toservetheinterestofthegeneralpublic【解析】关键词：claimsitsmotives。关键句：Thecompanyclaimsitsmotivesareessentiallypublic-spirited.Itsoverallmission,afterall,istoorganisetheworld'sinformation,soitwouldbeoddifthatinformationdidnotincludebooks.2.AccordingtoSantiagodelaMora,Google’sbook-scanningprojectwillA.helpthebroadmassesofreadersB.broadenhumanity’sintellectualhorizonsC.makefulluseofthepowerofitssearchengineD.revolutionisetheentirebookindustry【答案】B.broadenhumanity’sintellectualhorizons【解析】关键词：SantiagodelaMora。关键句：AsSantiagodelaMora,headofGoogleBooksforEurope,putsit:Bymakingitpossibletosearchthemillionsofbooksthatexisttoday,wehopetoexpandthefrontiersofhumanknowledge.3.OpponentsofGoogleBooksbelievethatdigitallyarchivingtheworld'sbooksshouldbecontrolledby_______.A)theworld’stechgiants3/13B)theworld’sleadinglibrariesC)non-profitorganizationsD)multinationalcompanies【答案】C.non-profitorganizations【解析】关键词：Opponent。关键句：InarecentessayintheNewYorkReviewofBooks,RobertDarnton,theheadofHarvardUniversity'slibrary,arguedthatbecausesuchbooksareacommonresource–thepossessionofusall–onlypublic,not-for-profitbodiesshouldbegiventhepowertocontrolthem.4.Googlehasinvolveditselfinalegalbattleasitignored______.A.thecopyrightofauthorsofout-of-printbooksB.theinterestoftraditionalsellersC.thecopyrightofthebooksitscannedD.thedifferencesofin-printandout-of-printbooks.【答案】C.thecopyrightofthebooksitscanned【解析】关键词：legalbattle。关键句：Atitscentre,however,isonesimpleissue:thatofcopyright.Theinconvenientfactaboutmostbooks,towhichGooglehasarguablypaidinsufficientattention,isthattheyareprotectedbycopyright.5.Googledefendsitsscanningin-copyrightbooksbysayingthat__________.A)makingelectroniccopiesofbooksisnotaviolationofcopyrightB)theonlinedisplayofin-copyrightbooksisnotforcommercialuseC)itiswillingtocompensatethecopyrightholdersD)itdisplaysonlyasma